Thursday, December 6, 2012

Janies blues

Janie lost her love
Janie lost her love
got hit with no glove

Joes words were a lie
Joes words were a lie
who knew he would die

Janie grows old
Janie grows old
as her stories are told

A mule was beaten
A mule was beaten
it has barely eaten

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  1. what was your inspiration for your poem?

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    1. @Nathaniel i was jus ttrying to let people know what happened during the book.

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  2. I dont understand you line that states "got hit with no glove" what do you mean by that?

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    1. @Adriana I said that becuase it ryhmed and Joe had slapped her

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  3. What does the mule have to do with janie and her blues
    (comment on mine)!

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    1. @Derick the mule made Janie sad because it was being mistreated.

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    1. @Genave he lied when he said he would never make her work

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  5. i like how you put that the mule has barely eaten

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    1. @Juan thank you, it was one of the main things the characters would talk about on the porch

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